Warhammer 40K: Kasrkin

I did not write this, but its pretty good. http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4941303/1/Kasrkin

"When you are always outnumbered, one man must be an army in his own right."

That was a pretty epic sentence, I loved the prologue, I cant wait to read the rest of it. lol seath your in the story I wonder if you die in a horrible way?

Seath, this wouldnt happen to be the story that would destroy your faith in your own writing? :suspect:
IF so, I wont read it because I still need to finish my own prologue.

Death no more wrote:"When you are always outnumbered, one man must be an army in his own right."

That was a pretty epic sentence, I loved the prologue, I cant wait to read the rest of it. lol seath your in the story I wonder if you die in a horrible way?

lol, I know, its awesome.
I was like, NO WAI when I saw "Kasrkin Seath" as a character.

Gold, this did not destroy my faith. In fact, this could probably give you some ideas

If I was still doing the FF, probably.
With my new world where the most advanced faction has WW2 tech and spaceships? Not likely.

Web Site denied

BBJynne wrote:Web Site denied

How why? Anyways seath you should make a warhammer FF since you know the universe

Death no more wrote:

BBJynne wrote:Web Site denied

How why? Anyways seath you should make a warhammer FF since you know the universe

I'm pretty sure I know it better than Seath.Only I'm not doing mine anymore/

No offense to Seath but he kinda has "Project ADD" he'll keep the FF/game/topic going for a while and then move on to something new when he's gotten bored of it. Either that or when he thinks he's hit a dead end on it.

Frankly I have some knowledge of the 40K universe, but my dad knows it hands down lol he's got every book they've come out with, even some rare collectable writtings XD were 40k nerds at this house

JB wrote:No offense to Seath but he kinda has "Project ADD" he'll keep the FF/game/topic going for a while and then move on to something new when he's gotten bored of it. Either that or when he thinks he's hit a dead end on it.

Frankly I have some knowledge of the 40K universe, but my dad knows it hands down lol he's got every book they've come out with, even some rare collectable writtings XD were 40k nerds at this house

That sounds so much better than LOTR nerds, which my dad is

JB wrote:No offense to Seath but he kinda has "Project ADD" he'll keep the FF/game/topic going for a while and then move on to something new when he's gotten bored of it. Either that or when he thinks he's hit a dead end on it.

Frankly I have some knowledge of the 40K universe, but my dad knows it hands down lol he's got every book they've come out with, even some rare collectable writtings XD were 40k nerds at this house

I think I do too, but im holding on to my AC unit thing untill I can afford parts so ic an actually put it together

I see some serious dead space influence in this....

“Is… is somebody there?!” A voice cried out from the other side of the door. It was certainly male, but badly shaken. “Help me! Help me damn it, I can’t open it! Get the damn door open they’re coming…!” The voice descended into babbling, obviously crying on the other side without even a thought of shame.

That's a actual part in the first dead space game. Same exact lines, just different setting and characters, except for the monsters to a extent.

So far, they had seen another of the creatures in the hallway, but its path had been blocked by debris. Dead space copying here is undeniable.

Death.....There are similarities, but it's NOT plagarism.
So what? HE said creature? What ELSE is he going to say?

Gold wrote:Death.....There are similarities, but it's NOT plagarism.
So what? HE said creature? What ELSE is he going to say?

I wasn't saying it was plagiarism, but there is influence in this. The way the creatures are, the part I showed you was undeniable influenced by dead space. Lot's of little things as well, but I guess its okay as long he mixes it up a little.

I think this was started before dead space was out.
Regardless, there are similar creatures in 40K to begin with

Kasrkin Seath wrote:I think this was started before dead space was out.
Regardless, there are similar creatures in 40K to begin with

He says at the end of the story that Dead space had influence on this. Anyways I finished it He is a good writer.

You know Death, Dead Space isn't the first thing to do these things. In fact Dead Space is probably one of the biggest example's of having multiple influences and elements from other media's of the genre.

So, what I'm trying to say is, there is probably a lot more movies/games/books/media's etc that are influences to this kind of thing rather then simply just Dead Space.

RockaHolicGameR wrote:You know Death, Dead Space isn't the first thing to do these things. In fact Dead Space is probably one of the biggest example's of having multiple influences and elements from other media's of the genre.

So, what I'm trying to say is, there is probably a lot more movies/games/books/media's etc that are influences to this kind of thing rather then simply just Dead Space.

He states them all the end, the last chapter. There's halo,dead space, and lots of others.

Here is another epic warhammer FF

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4062323/1/Battlegrounds_I_The_Gereziad_Campaign

Death no more wrote:He states them all the end, the last chapter. There's halo,dead space, and lots of others.

Yeah but what I'm trying to say is that Halo, Dead Space etc were not the first ones to do those things. He may be influenced by those specific ones but those games took infuences from many things and put them together which, to there benefit, made them that more uniqe. But still reconizing where those influences came from.

So basically, He may say for himself that Dead Space, Halo etc infuenced his writing but theres a lot more to thank for that then just those titles.

That's all.

I liked the ending before the real ending...
the "I serve mankind" one. It was more epic

Kasrkin Seath wrote:

Death no more wrote:"When you are always outnumbered, one man must be an army in his own right."

That was a pretty epic sentence, I loved the prologue, I cant wait to read the rest of it. lol seath your in the story I wonder if you die in a horrible way?

lol, I know, its awesome.
I was like, NO WAI when I saw "Kasrkin Seath" as a character.

Gold, this did not destroy my faith. In fact, this could probably give you some ideas

lets remember how many times my name is used in FF on that site... go on ill give you time to look