SPQR Test
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Re: SPQR Test
by Ruski Sun Jul 25, 2010 7:39 pm
I liked it. I especially like the part where Crito is about to be drowned and Gallus saves him, and doesn't demand anything.
I will continue reading this.
I will continue reading this.
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Re: SPQR Test
by Death no More Sun Jul 25, 2010 8:05 pm
Good story, I was surprised Gallus wasn't being a smart ass afterward.
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Re: SPQR Test
by PiEdude Sun Jul 25, 2010 8:21 pm
I love it!
The writing itself needs some refinement, but the plot, characters, attention to detail is all fantastic. I look forward to reading more.
The writing itself needs some refinement, but the plot, characters, attention to detail is all fantastic. I look forward to reading more.
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Re: SPQR Test
by Angatar Mon Jul 26, 2010 12:07 am
Ruski wrote:I liked it. I especially like the part where Crito is about to be drowned and Gallus saves him, and doesn't demand anything.
That's discipline for ya.Death no more wrote:Good story, I was surprised Gallus wasn't being a smart ass afterward.
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Re: SPQR Test
by R!zZle BiZzl£ Sat Jul 31, 2010 4:39 am
Offensive Bias wrote:Angatar?! You read?!
lol, pretty darn good chapters OB, keep 'em up.
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Re: SPQR Test
by Angatar Sat Jul 31, 2010 2:30 pm
I am the mod of this section, of course I read.Offensive Bias wrote:Angatar?! You read?!
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Re: SPQR Test
by Offensive Bias Mon Aug 02, 2010 2:47 am
Hmm, first time I've ever got a comment from you. Thank you!
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Re: SPQR Test
by Offensive Bias Mon Aug 09, 2010 1:27 pm
New chapter is up. Please, comment on it. All criticism is welcome.
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Re: SPQR Test
by Death no More Mon Aug 09, 2010 3:49 pm
Good... I'll read it soon
Good chapter, brutal aswell.
Good chapter, brutal aswell.
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Re: SPQR Test
by Jamiesway Mon Aug 09, 2010 6:37 pm
I Should print taht out...then read it,, cuz i read the first two paragragh and WANTED to read it.....but i hate reading shit on the desktop
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Re: SPQR Test
by Offensive Bias Tue Sep 14, 2010 10:51 am
Okay! Chapter Seven is here. Comments please.
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