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Post by Cheese on Wed May 27, 2009 6:01 pm

Aww... how come?

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Post by Angatar on Wed May 27, 2009 6:06 pm

Your other chapters were closer to a comedy, this chapter is more serious and it doesn't seem to fit in.

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Post by Cheese on Wed May 27, 2009 6:07 pm

Do you think so? I thought that more of the last chapter, and made an effort to pack more gags into this one.

Anyone else agree?

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Post by BBJynne on Wed May 27, 2009 6:22 pm

I thought the last chapter was good

and




this story has the best ending ever

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Post by Cheese on Thu May 28, 2009 6:02 am

BBJynne wrote:I thought the last chapter was good

and




this story has the best ending ever

I'll have to call the next bit an epilogue or something then Razz

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Post by A_Bearded_Swede on Thu May 28, 2009 12:56 pm

Cheese wrote:Do you think so? I thought that more of the last chapter, and made an effort to pack more gags into this one.

Anyone else agree?

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Post by Cheese on Thu May 28, 2009 1:07 pm

Cheese wrote:
BBJynne wrote:I thought the last chapter was good

and




this story has the best ending ever

I'll have to call the next bit an epilogue or something then Razz

Well if you liked the last ending... you'll LOVE this one!

Read: it still isn't finished Razz

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Post by BBJynne on Thu May 28, 2009 2:37 pm

oh


my bad

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Post by Cheese on Thu May 28, 2009 4:38 pm

Should be about 7 chapters in all Razz

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Post by Cheese on Thu May 28, 2009 6:25 pm

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Post by JB on Thu May 28, 2009 7:47 pm

lol, joyous irony after a comical scene Razz
If you got more coming i reaallly wanna know XD, i laughed so hard at the end
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Post by A_Bearded_Swede on Fri May 29, 2009 1:05 pm

Nice Chapter Cheese.

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Post by Cheese on Fri May 29, 2009 2:04 pm

Ok... now comes the exciting and climactic finale.

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Post by Cheese on Fri May 29, 2009 2:11 pm

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Post by Cheese on Fri May 29, 2009 2:13 pm

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Post by A_Bearded_Swede on Fri May 29, 2009 3:14 pm

AWESOME

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Post by Cheese on Sat May 30, 2009 4:52 am

I wouldn't expect that to be the end of Jeff, Dan and Fiona either. Oh no... not by a long shot.

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Post by JB on Sat May 30, 2009 6:19 am

lol, loved it dude
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Post by Kasrkin Seath on Sat May 30, 2009 6:33 am

This story is epic
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Post by Cheese on Sat May 30, 2009 7:05 am

Thanks all Very Happy

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Post by Cheese on Sat May 30, 2009 11:34 am

Any suggestions for changes before I do the final edit?

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Post by A_Bearded_Swede on Sat May 30, 2009 5:08 pm

Umm...
Nope..

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Post by Cheese on Sun May 31, 2009 6:50 am

Well that's lucky, because I'm just starting now - and as it turns out... I'm a very lazy person Razz

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