Re: A Matter of Brains

by Cheese Wed May 27, 2009 6:01 pm

Aww... how come?

by **Angatar** Wed May 27, 2009 6:06 pm

Your other chapters were closer to a comedy, this chapter is more serious and it doesn't seem to fit in.

I'm one of those weirdos that fixes spelling and grammar, so don't worry much.

by Cheese Wed May 27, 2009 6:07 pm

Do you think so? I thought that more of the last chapter, and made an effort to pack more gags into this one.

Anyone else agree?

by **BBJynne** Wed May 27, 2009 6:22 pm

I thought the last chapter was good

and

this story has the best ending ever

by Cheese Thu May 28, 2009 6:02 am

BBJynne wrote:I thought the last chapter was good

and

this story has the best ending ever

I'll have to call the next bit an epilogue or something then Razz

by A_Bearded_Swede Thu May 28, 2009 12:56 pm

Cheese wrote:Do you think so? I thought that more of the last chapter, and made an effort to pack more gags into this one.

Anyone else agree?

George Orwell=Epic Win

by Cheese Thu May 28, 2009 1:07 pm

Cheese wrote:
BBJynne wrote:I thought the last chapter was good

and

this story has the best ending ever

I'll have to call the next bit an epilogue or something then

Well if you liked the last ending... you'll LOVE this one!

Read: it still isn't finished Razz

by **BBJynne** Thu May 28, 2009 2:37 pm

oh

my bad

by Cheese Thu May 28, 2009 4:38 pm

Should be about 7 chapters in all Razz

by Cheese Thu May 28, 2009 6:25 pm

by JB Thu May 28, 2009 7:47 pm

lol, joyous irony after a comical scene Razz

If you got more coming i reaallly wanna know XD, i laughed so hard at the end

by A_Bearded_Swede Fri May 29, 2009 1:05 pm

Nice Chapter Cheese.

by Cheese Fri May 29, 2009 2:04 pm

Ok... now comes the exciting and climactic finale.

by Cheese Fri May 29, 2009 2:11 pm

by Cheese Fri May 29, 2009 2:13 pm

by A_Bearded_Swede Fri May 29, 2009 3:14 pm

AWESOME

by Cheese Sat May 30, 2009 4:52 am

I wouldn't expect that to be the end of Jeff, Dan and Fiona either. Oh no... not by a long shot.

by JB Sat May 30, 2009 6:19 am

lol, loved it dude

by **Kasrkin Seath** Sat May 30, 2009 6:33 am

This story is epic

by Cheese Sat May 30, 2009 7:05 am

Thanks all Very Happy

by Cheese Sat May 30, 2009 11:34 am

Any suggestions for changes before I do the final edit?

by A_Bearded_Swede Sat May 30, 2009 5:08 pm

Umm...
Nope..

by Cheese Sun May 31, 2009 6:50 am

Well that's lucky, because I'm just starting now - and as it turns out... I'm a very lazy person Razz

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