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Post by MrX Tue Feb 14, 2012 8:24 pm

I’ve begun my voyage in a paper boat without a bottom. I will fly to the moon in it. I’ve been folded along a crease in time, a weakness in the sheet of life. Now you’ve settled on the opposite side of the paper to me. You can see your traces in the ink that soaks through the fiber, the pulped vegetation. When we become waterlogged and the cage disintegrates, we will intermingle. When this paper airplane leaves the cliff edge and carves parallel paper trails in the dark, we will come together.
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Post by Lord Pheonix Tue Feb 14, 2012 8:35 pm

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Post by CivBase Tue Feb 14, 2012 9:43 pm

Was looking at this earlier today. From what I can tell, it's a new idea that needs work... but an interesting idea none the less. My question is, though, does it have a plot? Or is it just a lot of ambiance and background information?
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Post by MrX Wed Feb 15, 2012 5:09 am

The plot goes as far as you understand whats going on, which most of the time, isn't very far. (Unless you're a very deep thinker.) But the beauty of the ambient-classical music, landscape, and poetry creates this fully immersible atmosphere that you can't help but get lost in.
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