The Tale of the Crimson Flame

Rough Draft made out of boredom

In the beginning it was peaceful. The Halo Wars Forumers lived together in harmony without fighting except for brief times when the Demon of the Flames awoke and caused chaos amongst the noobs. But one day the peace was broken during the Noob Rush caused by the fabled E3 convention. The users who would in time be known as The Ancients fought against the onslought of Noobs from inside their Flame Bunkers and were forced to stay bunkerd down for weeks. In the end the Ancients emerged victorious and had even managed to turn some of the Noobs into contributing members of the Forums.

All did not remain well. With the impending release of Halo Wars the Moderators of the forum began to crack down on the users and were destroying members left and right. Two of the Ancients had decided to take it into their own hands to survive against the Moderators onslought and create a safe haven against their Madness. The Ancients Pheonix and UNSC had been members of a seperate site for some time and came up with a plan: Forcefully take control of the group known as the Spirit of Fire and make it into an Ark. Pheonix strode into the SoF's council room and killed their leader SgtZach giving the rest of the council an ultamateum: Join or Die.

Pheonix and UNSC took the Council along with the former members of SoF and reformed the site to their own image creating The Crimson Flame. With Pheonix in charge and his position unrivaled he disolved The Council and crowned himself Lord Pheonix, Master of the Crimson Flames and with it promoted his right hand UNSC into his ArchAngel.

While Lord Pheonix and the ArchAngel were taking over SoF the Halo Forums had erupt into chaos with the release of Halo Wars. The Moderators had lost their minds and had begun banning indiscimenently against any user who spoke ill of Halo Wars and had started a personal crusade against all those that were called Ancients and Senior. Lord Pheonix and UNSC jumped into the pits of Halo Wars and began The Rapture of Halo Wars Forums leading as many users away from HWF into The Crimson Flame. Lord Pheonix and the other Ancients fought against the Moderators with all their might but many amongst their ranks were lost with the greatest casualty being the most Ancient of Members: Skita. When the last of the users had safetly made it to The Crimson Flame Lord Pheonix stood alone to fight the leader of the Moderators, Aloysius. The Two battled for days before Lord Pheonix finally stood triumphant and Aloysius was forced to sulk away defeated into his abomination of a site.

The Crimson Flame rejoiced in its victory against the Halo Wars Forums but even still amongst the celebration the Ancients remembered what the site had once been and were saddened to have to battle and leave the place they once called home.

Sounds good to me.

But it didnt really happen like that.... You forgot to mention Ogames involvement.

Took over the site and made the members part of TCF, thats Ogames involvement.

The Ancients Pheonix and UNSC had been members of a separate site for some time and came up with a plan: Forcefully take control of the group known as the Spirit of Fire and make it into an Ark

I know but you make it out as if there was no interest in Ogame and that you were a mastermind of sorts.

It didn't really fit into the way I was telling the story and I AM a Mastermind of Sorts lol.



This is the beginning, there are more after this that follow TCF.

This...needs to be made into a movie.

i think i most likely read it wrong but i'll say it anyway... Beta Hoax raid didn't get mentioned?

also its a rough draft, came out good from my perspective, good language to.

Beta could be interpreted as the fight.......


Could make another chapter of it being a raid against HWF, but makes us look like the bad guy from that.....



Could add that part into the final version then.





I take ideas to implement into final draft and into next chapters.

Change it from a 'raid' into a 'Crusade'?

Kasrkin Seath wrote:Change it from a 'raid' into a 'Crusade'?

There is an extremely fine line.

Kasrkin Seath wrote:Change it from a 'raid' into a 'Crusade'?

AND SO IT WAS!!!


IT IS TO THE VICTORS THAT THE PEN IS HELD BY TO WRITE OF THE EVENTS OF HISTORY!!!

Ah UNSC.... where did he ever go to?

He got a life

Lord Pheonix wrote:He got a life

pffffff noob

Several stayed behind to save as many as they could...

Gruntmaster was among them.

*a single tear is shed in memory*

Felix wrote:

Lord Pheonix wrote:He got a life

pffffff noob

ah yes, a "Life", we have dismissed that claim.

jokes aside, thats good for him, unfortunate for us...

Here's a first hand look at my battle with Aloy

https://2img.net/h/i189.photobucket.com/albums/z293/Pheonix092/untitled.jpg

Felix wrote:
pffffff noob

For your sake, I highly suggest that you rescind that comment.

Archangel wrote:

Felix wrote:
pffffff noob

For your sake, I highly suggest that you rescind that comment.

I REGRET NOTHING!

Felix wrote:

Archangel wrote:

Felix wrote:
pffffff noob

For your sake, I highly suggest that you rescind that comment.

I REGRET NOTHING!

So be it. You have brought destruction upon yourself.