Deus Ex Grana
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Deus Ex Grana
by Rasq'uire'laskar Thu Nov 12, 2009 9:44 am
It's a fanfic I posted a while back on Fanfiction.net. It's just a oneshot, and I was wondering what you guys think of it.
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5455003/1/Deus_ex_Grana
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5455003/1/Deus_ex_Grana
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Re: Deus Ex Grana
by kslidz Mon Nov 16, 2009 6:43 pm
are you srsly responding L O L
for your posts krazy
for your posts krazy
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Re: Deus Ex Grana
by Rotaretilbo Tue Nov 17, 2009 2:58 am
Well, that was a fun read. Just wish you'd have gone into more detail concerning the interview. Ending was a touch anticlimactic. A lot of build up and then lots of ambiguousness.
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Re: Deus Ex Grana
by Rasq'uire'laskar Tue Nov 17, 2009 9:08 am
You're right. That is a problem.
I was writing it out, and I really couldn't think of more to add to the interview. I really should have done something, outlined the company more, but I just wanted to get the fic out.
I was writing it out, and I really couldn't think of more to add to the interview. I really should have done something, outlined the company more, but I just wanted to get the fic out.
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