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Post by Rasq'uire'laskar Sat Oct 25, 2008 9:10 am

Fanfic I wrote a few weeks back. It's pretty cynical, but it's still pretty good.

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Post by PiEdude Sat Oct 25, 2008 9:32 am

Really great.

I love you rasq.
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Post by CivBase Sat Oct 25, 2008 11:22 am

No Pie, never again.

And very good Rasq! But shouldn't this go in the FF section?
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Post by BBJynne Sat Oct 25, 2008 11:24 am

very nice quirel!

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Post by Lord Pheonix Sat Oct 25, 2008 1:14 pm

read it when you first posted it, but it was still awesome ^_^
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Post by Vtrooper Sat Oct 25, 2008 4:05 pm

PiElord wrote:Really great.

I love you rasq.

*Scout kills throws pie off construct* never again or she will kill you

*kills pie because he is a bears fan* thats for likeing them raggedy ass bears
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Post by KristallNacht Sat Oct 25, 2008 8:10 pm

fixes

Rasq'uire'laskar wrote:nor was it the only mind altering substance he’d indulged in that night.

and thats as far as my attention span got me

sorry lol
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Post by PiEdude Sat Oct 25, 2008 10:50 pm

Mereel wrote:
PiElord wrote:Really great.

I love you rasq.

*Scout kills throws pie off construct* never again or she will kill you

*kills pie because he is a bears fan* thats for likeing them raggedy ass bears

*brutally murders pushes V off of a cliff*
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Post by Rasq'uire'laskar Sat Oct 25, 2008 11:59 pm

PiElord wrote:Really great.

I love you rasq.

Thanks.

CivBase wrote:No Pie, never again.

And very good Rasq! But shouldn't this go in the FF section?

Thanks. I haven't been on here in over a month, so I didn't notice that section. If a mod could move it, I'd be much obliged.

NHW wrote:very nice quirel!

Thanks.

Lord Pheonix wrote:read it when you first posted it, but it was still awesome ^_^

Glad you decided to review it this time. "Nightmare" should be up this weekend.

Mereel wrote:
PiElord wrote:Really great.

I love you rasq.

*Scout kills throws pie off construct* never again or she will kill you

*kills pie because he is a bears fan* thats for likeing them raggedy ass bears

Please, feel free to quit spamming this thread. I couldn't care less about professional sports.
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Post by rzgrz Sun Oct 26, 2008 12:43 am

serriously dudes no more spam....although i do agree on the topic being moved to FF section...(notice first word said: Fanfic)
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Post by Don Corleone Sun Oct 26, 2008 6:55 am

I very much enjoy cynical readings.
That was very good
Best thing ive read in a good while.
Keep up the good work ^^
Sorta reminds me of Flag of our Fathers.
Anyone else?

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Post by XNate02 Sun Oct 26, 2008 8:39 am

very good
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Post by PiEdude Sun Oct 26, 2008 9:23 am

Don Corleone wrote:I very much enjoy cynical readings.
That was very good
Best thing ive read in a good while.
Keep up the good work ^^
Sorta reminds me of Flag of our Fathers.
Anyone else?

I thought that too.

Especially the public pissing, and the hate towards the higher ranking military officials and the media.
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Post by Don Corleone Sun Oct 26, 2008 9:32 am

and the war bonds.
And about how the fallen people were unrecognized you know?

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Post by Rasq'uire'laskar Sun Oct 26, 2008 1:34 pm

Don Corleone wrote:I very much enjoy cynical readings.
That was very good
Best thing ive read in a good while.
Keep up the good work ^^
Sorta reminds me of Flag of our Fathers.
Anyone else?

Thanks.
Mmm... Flags of our Fathers was one of those rare stories that made a good book and a good movie. I suppose it's possible that I unconsciously added references to it.

PiElord wrote:

I thought that too.

Especially the public pissing, and the hate towards the higher ranking military officials and the media.

Urinating in public. That was actually started in an early draft, where the story was to be a drunken conversation between a Marine and a (sober) Spartan who had just exited a War Bonds drive. I wanted an action that would sum up the Major's opinion of all things Spartan and DPI, and urinating on a poster of a Spartan seemed like a good thing to do.

Don Corleone wrote:and the war bonds.
And about how the fallen people were unrecognized you know?

War Bonds... that is actually something that was inspired by Flags of our Fathers, but I was planning on making it sort of a recurring theme in my fanfics. When you think about it, a simple banner in a military parade that says "Buy War Bonds" says a lot more than just three words.

Meh, a lot of the story elements in my fics get planned out way ahead of time.

XNate02 wrote:very good
Thank you.
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Post by Kasrkin Seath Sun Oct 26, 2008 5:05 pm

Good story, I like Satire.
I hate ES right now
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Post by Rasq'uire'laskar Wed Oct 29, 2008 6:08 pm

Yeah, but you're preaching to the choir.

Wish somebody had a CoD mod for Halo I could help with.. but I wouldn't be able to help much.
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Post by Kasrkin Seath Wed Oct 29, 2008 6:17 pm

lol
I have a DoW mod that is in progress(I can edit units, just not models and campaign)

I have not updated it on the site here lately, but I have the current units on teh IG side edited the way I want em
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