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Post by PiEdude on Fri Dec 18, 2009 9:50 pm

Well, I'm not going to rob Vigil the pleasure of reviewing this one, and I've finished it. Here's a few problems:

Spoiler:

1. They toss Halo lines around like salt on my driveway this time of year. And they actually threw a Dark Knight line in there ("We make our own luck").
2. The Splazer
3. The Covenant have green blood.
4. The Elite's faces still look like fish, with their dead eyes and awkward mandibles.
5. Guess what (or who) the package was? Halsey. Yeah, they've officially crucified anything left that could be considered remotely canon.


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Post by CivBase on Fri Dec 18, 2009 9:51 pm

It's already been reviewed by Vigil (in his original package thread)

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Post by PiEdude on Fri Dec 18, 2009 9:55 pm

Oh, I didn't read that.

Well, I highlighted a few flaws anyway.
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Post by Vigil on Sat Dec 19, 2009 4:38 am

CivBase wrote:It's already been reviewed by Vigil (in his original package thread)

ROFL

Silly PIE.

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