Operational Detachment Sierra

this is the character list so far

Character list

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Operational Detachment Sierra

Delta squad
Sierra-791 Chief Warrant Officer [Name Classified] “Echo” Squad leader
Sierra-792 Captain [Name Classified] “Dare” Second in Command
Sierra-1023 Corporal Taylor H. Miles “Dutch” Heavy Weapon gunner/Driver
Sierra-992 Lance Corporal Kojo Agu “Romeo” Sniper
Sierra-1372 Lance Corporal [Name Classified] “Rookie” Recruit
Sierra-934 Privet First Class Michael Crespo “Mickey” Demolition Expert

Gulf Squad
Sierra/X-ray-020 Lieutenant Nathan [Last Name Classified] Squad leader/Sniper
Sierra-799 Corporal Frank E. Bacon “Frankie” Demolition Expert
Sierra-824 Chief Petty Officer Marko Danks “Pie” Heavy Weapon Gunner/Medic
Sierra-892 Lance Corporal Brandon Bebuga [No Alibi] Driver




and i know i used the names from ODST but lets face it im not that creative

Prologue part 1
Wilmington, Delaware
United Republic of North America
September 16, 2803

Looking up Echo noticed a large ship above the city. “Well this is it” said Echo over is COM to the rest of Delta squad “Romeo get in that old church tower, Dare and Mickey set up on the left side of the street, Dutch and Rookie your with me on the Right”. Everyone started to run into position around the 2 square block area around the church, the highest point in the city for possibly 1,000 years or less, to set up a perimeter. Holding this position is important to holding the city and, because this raid has been confirmed to last for several weeks, evacuation for the civilians. “Rookie move” said Mickey pointing over to where Dutch was “I’m not in the mood to lose this position because of your negligence.” I remember when he was just a Rookie but then again SHE out ranks him thought Echo moving into position.
“Dare”
“Yes Chief” said Dare looking up at Echo
“Help Mickey with that Rocket ammo we only have a short time until the Brutes get here”
“Yes sir” and Dare moved and grabbed 2 cases of rockets and moved to over to there position. “Um…” said a voice next to Echo “yes Rookie” said Echo coming over to her
“What do you need Rookie”
“For one why dose everyone call me Rookie”
“Well its what you are a Rookie we don’t use our real names most of use have lost all memory of our homes and family that’s why I’m called Echo”
“Ok ECHO” said the Rookie in a kidding way and walked back over to where Dutch was with his M6 Laser based weapon. “Ok clips in safety off” Echo said to himself as his COM sprang to life “Sir” said Romeo over the COM “I got a large amount of Brutes and grunts with several Wraith tanks but there holding back”
“Understood Romeo fire when in range…”
“Artillery inbound” screamed Dutch over the COM
“Everyone get to cover!” said Echo over the COM as the first Wraith bomb hit the ground.


NOTE: it still needs someone to edit it

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“Orders, Sir?” Dutch asked Echo as several brutes moved up the street.
“Hit the gold ones first,” replied Echo over the COM. “Romeo, when Dare makes contact with the navy, you’ll vector them in.”
“Yes sir,” said Romeo over the COM.
“Chief, I don’t think I can make contact. I’m getting to much chatter around the city,” said Dare.
“Keep trying, Dare. I know you can get through,” urged Echo, turning to shoot the leading brute. Super heated metal from the brutes’ main weapons, the spiker and brute shot, flew over their heads as they fired down the incline of the hill. A super heated slug from a spiker whizzed by Echo’s head as he came up from behind the sandbag.
“Close one there, wasn’t it?” said Dutch.
“Check your mouth, Dutch.”
“Okay, Sir.”
“Choppers coming up the road!” yelled Mickey over the COM.
“I’ll handle this,” said Echo, looking over the sandbags. “Dutch, watch the rookie.”
“Aye, sir!” said Dutch.
Echo quickly jumped over the sandbags and ran toward the closest chopper. Remember your training, thought Echo before he jumped up onto the closest one, reached onto one of the openings around the wheel, and quickly pulled out his M6C/SOCOM pistol and shot several rounds into the driver. He quickly did a side jump into the side of the driver’s seat and knocked the driver out, taking the vehicle under his control.
“Amazing,” said the rookie, looking over the sandbags.
“Kid, Echo dose that almost every battle,” said Dutch.
“I’m no kid as far as I can tell. We’re the same age!”
“Shut up and shoot and that’s an order!” shouted Dare over the COM.
Echo drove his captured chopper into the second chopper, sending both flying off the road, jumped out, and rolled as a large explosion followed them, crashing into a wall only a few meters away from the rookie and Dutch’s position. Running back up the hill, Echo heard his COM buzz with static. “Delta Squad, this is Gulf Squad. We are entering Wilmington from the north and we’ve brought light vehicle support. Do you read?” said the familiar voice of Gulf squad’s leader.
“This is Sierra-791 to Gulf lead. Is that you Nate?” replied Echo
“Sounds like I’m saving your butt again, Echo.”

Arbiter Mereel wrote:LP can you deleat that post and this post i dont want spam in this thread

That wasn't spam, are you even clear on what spam is?

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Speaking your mind or being an annoying little ****?

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im with RX on the being annoying

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awe the rudeness how i love it so
just keep putting wood on the fire boys

socom427 wrote:awe the rudeness how i love it so
just keep putting wood on the fire boys

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I was actualy complementing it...

yes but most of that coment was spam

regardless
i still like it =D

Prologue Part 3

A Pelican Drop ship soon landed with one M12LRV “Warthog” and 4 soldiers walked out of the troop bay onto the damaged street.
“Looks like you guys took a beating” said Nate there squad leader.
“Were ok Nate but we needed the help” said Dare nodding here head at the Rookie.
“She’s new Dare you have to remember that” said Echo.
The Rookie was still over behind the sandbags looking down the road at the dead brutes and grunts. Dutch was still there as well but was checking his M6’s Charge.

Gulf Squad was made up of 4 “Operators” Nate, Squad Leader and Sniper he is better then Romeo at the Range but unlike Romeo used the BR-55HB instead of the SRS-99D; Frankie, Demolition Expert and all around joker of Gulf Squad; Pie, Gulfs Medic and Heavy weapons he’s saved almost all our lives at least once; and Brandon, there Driver

“Echo can you come over here” said Pie over giving the Rookie and Dutch a once over
“Yeah Pie” said Echo walking over
“Your recruit, has she been augmented yet?”
“No Pie she’s only been in the program 2 hours she hasn’t even been to our home yet”
“Ok Echo making sure, also can I look at you back?”
“Ok” said Echo turning around
“Thought so” said Pie as a sharp pain came threw Echo’s back and Pie showed him what he pulled out “Metal slug I don’t know why you keep going out of cover were not like our brethren in the Human Covenant War”
Echo gave a nod and when back over to talk with Nate, Dare and Frankie.
“… and that’s why Yankee won’t be here in time” said Nate as Echo walked back over
“Well” Said Frankie “the Delaware National Guard will be here soon”
“Yes” said Echo “but we need the Pennsylvania, Maryland and New Jersey Air National Guards to help hold the city”
“Right well” said Nate “I’ll have Frankie set up his tube over with you, Dutch and the Rook, me and Brandon take the warthog and block the road with is and set up behind it, and Pie will go over with Dare and Mickey, does that sound good Echo?”
“Yes that should allow us to hold until the Guard arrives”
“Alright then” Nate then went off to get his squad into positions
Echo’s COM when to like with the voice of a man possibly WPD “This is Pelican Seven-Five we have been hit and are…” the come then when to static and looked out in the distance and zoomed in on a WPD Pelican that was trailing smoke.

pretty good so far but there are a lot of grammar errors

Part 4

A ringing sound started in Echo’s ear as a wraith shell landed in front him and thrown him into the warthog.
“Is he all right?” asked the Rookie over the COM
“Rookie, Echo’s always all right I mean he has already been hit today” said Pie preparing his AIE-486H Machine Gun.
Echo quickly got up and ran back to where the Rookie and Dutch were, pulled out a Magazine of ammo, banged it agents his head to make sure it was full, and loaded it. Another shell blew up a few yards away from the warthog. Nate got up and ran for the shell crater and called over to Pie over the COM “Pie fallow me and set up the MG in the crater”
“Yes sir!” said pie picking up the MG and bringing it over to the crater
After a few more minutes the shelling stopped and a second wave of Brutes started running up the road. “Light them up!” yelled Nate over the COM and instantly the rest of Gulf started firing down the street. “You heard him Delta” said Echo starting to fire his Assault Rifle down range and the rest of his squad did, except the Rookie. Echo’s COM soon buzzed to life coming from Romeo
“Chef I got a Brute Chieftain coming up the road” said Romeo
“I will handle him, cover me!” said Echo
“Echo that’s suicide why would you…” said Dare soon being cut off by Echo
“I’m doing what must be done.”
Echo jumped over the sandbags and charged the Chieftain, getting a clip of his Assault Rifle ammo into the Chieftain before hitting a melee into his shields but the Chieftain picked him up. “Ah a demon I shall be remembered for this” said the Chieftain looking into his face. Echo’s COM came to life again but this time the voice was different and had more static then his squad. “This is Commander Miller of the 111th Attack VTOL Squadron we are entering your airspace at this time.”
After that the Brute threw Echo into the air and swung his hammer Echo heard a quick “no!” over his COM but was soon sent flying into the warthog. Looking up Echo saw 2 Hornets with the “PA” abbreviation on the tail which is the abbreviation for the Pennsylvania Air National Guard. Out of the corner of his eye Echo saw Pie run over and give him a once over, but said something he couldn’t hear because his eardrums were blown out by the hammer. What Echo could tell was a Pelican had landed and he was being loaded onto it. He recognized the crew chiefs face this meant it was Charlie 56 “Mohawk” Deltas air support and transport on behind the lines missions. The bay door soon closed, and everyone from Gulf and Delta was there, the mission was over and Echo could rest until there back abroad the Prosecutor.

did anyone read this part?